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The Crucial Difference
Applying to college or grad school? The admissions process is extremely competitive, especially if you're applying to a top program. That's why your admissions essays can make the crucial difference between acceptance and rejection.
I'm a professional admissions essay editor, and I'll help you make the strongest possible case for your admission, with clear, concise, powerful essays. I have more than 20 years of experience helping college and grad school applicants create effective admissions essays. I can help improve your chances significantly by:
Improving the clarity and readability of your essays by rewriting phrases, sentences, and paragraphs
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FREE sample edit
Email me one of your drafts as a file attachment. I'll edit a brief sample at no charge to demonstrate what I can do for you. I will also be happy to provide samples of previous essays I've worked on. I recommend that you also ask for a sample edit from the other editors you're considering; it's the only way to make sure they can deliver what they claim.
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Call or write to learn more about how I can help you improve your chances of admission to the program of your choice.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Dave Bolick, admissions consultant
This year, every top program will receive thousands of applications for a limited number of spaces. Your admissions essays are your last best chance to convince them to give one of those valuable spaces to you. Make the most of the opportunity—call or email me to learn more.
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